- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:51, 16 December 2019 (UTC)
Reuven Elbaz
![Yeshivat Ohr Hachaim](//upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/4/4e/Yeshivat_Ohr_Hachaim%2C_Jerusalem.jpg/133px-Yeshivat_Ohr_Hachaim%2C_Jerusalem.jpg)
Yeshivat Ohr Hachaim
5x expanded by Yoninah (talk). Self-nominated at 22:39, 24 November 2019 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
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Hook eligibility:
- Cited:
- Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
- Interesting:
![Yes](//upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/0/03/Green_check.svg/13px-Green_check.svg.png)
- Other problems:
- "Palatial" comes off as opinion-based.
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
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Overall:
buidhe 23:34, 24 November 2019 (UTC)
- @Buidhe: thank you for the review. Why are you approving it if you disagree with the wording? I changed palatial to "towering" in the article, as per the source, but I am having trouble using this term in the hook. Putting it in quotes will also distract from the hook. The campus is at least a block square, though I have not found a source to verify this, and it really is palatial–my photograph shows only the front, while the building climbs higher and higher to the rear. Yoninah (talk) 23:41, 24 November 2019 (UTC)
- Yoninah, if it's mentioned in a source I think it would be ok. Since you didn't use the word in the article, I had assumed that was not the case. buidhe 23:49, 24 November 2019 (UTC)
- @Buidhe: I'll try to look for a source in Hebrew to verify the size and shape. Yoninah (talk) 23:58, 24 November 2019 (UTC)
- @Buidhe: I'm unable to find more information in Hebrew sources. Would you like me to suggest another hook? Yoninah (talk) 21:52, 28 November 2019 (UTC)
- Yoninah, I think that would be best. buidhe 21:54, 28 November 2019 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that Rabbi Reuven Elbaz used to frequent pool halls and coffee shops around Jerusalem to talk with secular Jewish youth about religion? Yoninah (talk) 22:07, 28 November 2019 (UTC)
ALT1 accepted. I'm not watching the page so I didn't notice the update. buidhe 02:11, 8 December 2019 (UTC)