- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 12:46, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
Rob Oakley
edit- ... that 2012 Australia Paralympic equestrian Rob Oakley started riding horses as a way to impress the girls?
- Reviewed: I Will Be
- Comment: Moved from user space. Save for Paralympics?
Created/expanded by LauraHale (talk). Self nom at 02:31, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
- The reference for the hook fact states that he was trying to impress one girl, not "the girls". This would need updating here and in the article. One further minor point is the reference ordering - it would be nice to see inline citations in numeric order, but this isn't something that would stop the DYK process. violet/riga [talk] 16:26, 1 August 2012 (UTC)
- ... ALT1 that 2012 Australia Paralympic equestrian Rob Oakley started riding horses as a way to impress a girl?
Is alt1 okay? Re-ordered some of citations to get them more in numerical order. --LauraHale (talk) 20:30, 1 August 2012 (UTC)
I've changed the article to be in line with this hook and the reference. Good work. All ready to go. violet/riga [talk] 20:34, 1 August 2012 (UTC)
