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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 00:20, 30 March 2018 (UTC)

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Robert Howard Hodgkin

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5x expanded by Usernameunique (talk). Self-nominated at 06:37, 20 March 2018 (UTC).

  • It is long enough (though barely 5x...), new enough, etc. Can't find plagiarism, the sources are fine, the hook is verified. BUT I don't really think the hook is that strong. You could consider adding "until he served in WW1" or something like that? Maybe? Also, Usernameunique, please see my edit summary on married/maiden names. Thanks, Drmies (talk) 02:04, 21 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Good edits all around, Drmies, thanks for the points and copyedit. Here are some alts (speaking of squeaking by, ALT2 is, by sheer dumb luck, exactly 200 characters long):

:::ALT1: ... that Robert Howard Hodgkin was part of a "Quaker dynasty", until he joined the army?

ALT2: ... that Robert Howard Hodgkin was part of a "Quaker dynasty" that included a banker, a Marxist historian, a Nobel-winning chemist, a painter, another Nobel winner, and the namesake of Hodgkin's lymphoma? --Usernameunique (talk) 02:20, 21 March 2018 (UTC)
  • I think we have a winner here! ALT2 it is. Drmies (talk) 02:34, 21 March 2018 (UTC)
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