Template:Did you know nominations/Robert McLean (minister)

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The result was: promoted by Capsulecap (talk) 18:47, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

Robert McLean (minister)

Source: Hook info can be found in McLean’s obituary published in the Los Angeles Times on 1 November 1926. Obituary says, McLean was a "... Presbyterian clergyman ..."; "For six years he was a missionary in ... Concepción, Chile"; "He founded the Presbyterian churches in Grants Pass and Klamath Falls, Oregon"; and "He was a member of the Oregon state legislature ..."

Created by Orygun (talk). Self-nominated at 20:58, 7 August 2021 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article is new enough, long enough and sourced. No copyvio on Earwig and qpq is done. The hook is cited and interesting, but it feels a bit long, so I'm proposing to cut out the intro ("...was a Presbyterian minister who...") since that isn't necessary to the hook and will be one of the first things anyone who reads his page sees. BuySomeApples (talk) 00:51, 18 August 2021 (UTC)

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