Template:Did you know nominations/Roman Tomb (Silistra)
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Jolly Ω Janner 04:04, 15 February 2016 (UTC)
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Roman Tomb (Silistra)
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A fresco of a female servant in the Roman Tomb of Silistra
... that the vivid 4th-century frescoes in the Roman Tomb of Silistra depict a procession of servants carrying gifts to the tomb's owners?
- ALT1:
... that the vivid frescoes in the Roman Tomb of Silistra are a "unique example of art and life" in the region during Late Antiquity? - Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Love You Baba
- ALT1:
Created by TodorBozhinov (talk). Self-nominated at 13:08, 24 January 2016 (UTC).
- Review
- Article is new, long enough, and meets policy requirements. I do not note any unacceptable paraphrasing from the principal source given (Atanasov 2009)
- Hooks are fine in terms of both length and interest, but should omit the unnecessary word 'vivid' which is POV as not validated by citation. I would opt for the original hook (as thus adjusted) given the choice. (suggested ALT2, below) The hook is adequately cited.
- ALT2... that the 4th-century frescoes in the Roman Tomb of Silistra depict a procession of servants carrying gifts to the tomb's owners (example pictured)?
- Pic is in public domain.
- QPQ undertaken.
OK to go if proposer is happy with ALT2
- --Smerus (talk) 20:51, 24 January 2016 (UTC)
