Template:Did you know nominations/Rudolf-Oetker-Halle
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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 23:18, 11 June 2022 (UTC)
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Rudolf-Oetker-Halle
Rudolf-Oetker-Halle in 2008
- ... that the Rudolf-Oetker-Halle (pictured), the concert hall of Bielefeld, was completed in 1930 and remained basically unchanged? Source: several
- Reviewed: Brassey's
Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 14:57, 16 May 2022 (UTC).
- The hook is fine but I think it could probably be reworded slightly differently to make it less clunky and putting more emphasis on it being unchanged. How about the following wording?
- ALT1 ... that the Rudolf-Oetker-Halle (pictured), the concert hall of Bielefeld, remains mostly unchanged from its completion in 1930?
With that said, there's an issue with the hook fact right now and that is the fact that it "remains largely in its original state" is not supported by a reference in the article. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:45, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you, helpful, fixed. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:11, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
Article meets newness and length requirements. The hook fact is interesting and cited inline to a German source so AGF there. QPQ has been done. No close paraphrasing detected. I'll leave the choice in hook to the promoter, but otherwise this is good to go. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:53, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
