- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:14, 21 November 2019 (UTC)
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Safiya Wazir
- ... that American politician Safiya Wazir
initiallycame to Uzbekistan as a refugee from Afghanistan? Source: [1] "[Wazir] escaped Afghanistan as a child and lived in a Uzbekistan refugee camp for ten years"
- Reviewed: South Audley Street
- Comment: Another day, another BBC 100 Women article submitted to DYK.
Created by HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk). Nominated by Miraclepine (talk) at 02:23, 27 October 2019 (UTC).
Hi HickoryOughtShirt?4, review follows: article created 25 October; article exceeds minimum length; article is adequately well written; article is cited inline throughout to reliable sources; hook fact is interesting, though is worded a little unusually - the "initally" part sounds a little strange to me as there is no connection between that and her coming to the US (I would have said "politician Safiya Wazir fled Afghanistan to Uzbekistan as a refugee before emigrating to the United States?"), though perhaps it is an American English thing? hook is backed up by the cited source (Business Insider); There's one similar phrasing from a source that you may want to look at: "She sat on the board of directors for the Community Action Program and became vice-chairwoman of the Head Start Policy Council" versus "serving as the board of directors for the Community Action Program and vice-chairwoman of the Head Start Policy Council" from the Concord Monitor, though perhaps there's limited ways this can be reworded; nomination needs a QPQ review; if you could let me know your comments, I'll come back to finish the review, thanks - Dumelow (talk) 10:20, 28 October 2019 (UTC)
- @Dumelow: I did a QPQ shortly before I submitted this but forgot to attach it here. And the quoted thing may fit the limited ways bill. ミラP 15:18, 28 October 2019 (UTC)
Hi Miraclepine (sorry I pinged the wrong person first time), thanks for providing the QPQ. I've reworded the sentence I found slightly to be a little further from the source. I'm still not wholly sold on the wording of the hook but am happy it is interesting and factual, so will approve - Dumelow (talk) 16:28, 28 October 2019 (UTC)
