Template:Did you know nominations/Saint Nicholas Church (Kuršumlija)
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 11:58, 5 December 2013 (UTC)
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Church of St. Nicholas, Kuršumlija
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... that Saint Nicolas church, in Kuršumlija, Serbia is the oldest foundation of Serbian king Stefan Nemanja?
Created by Jakarandalu (talk). Self nominated at 14:51, 3 November 2013 (UTC).
- The article was little bit older than 5 days in the moment of nomination (8 days), but since it was created or expanded after the oldest date listed in Template talk:Did you know#Older nominations rule D9 applies here. The article is long enough (3,718 characters).
Large part of the second paragraph with more than 1,500 characters is completely unreferenced.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 10:03, 4 November 2013 (UTC)
- The article was little bit older than 5 days in the moment of nomination (8 days), but since it was created or expanded after the oldest date listed in Template talk:Did you know#Older nominations rule D9 applies here. The article is long enough (3,718 characters).
- What does "oldest foundation" mean? It has the oldest foundation? It is the oldest church to be founded? -- Esemono (talk) 04:03, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
- I have done some copy editing. It is all referenced, although a bit over-reliant on one source. The hook is not good, since the article discusses controversy over whether this is in fact the oldest church founded by Stefan Nemanja. Suggested alternatives:
- ALT1 ... that the Church of St. Nicholas (pictured) in Kuršumlija, Serbia, is one of the oldest founded by Stefan Nemanja?
- ALT2 ... that the Church of St. Nicholas (pictured) in Kuršumlija, Serbia, was completed in 1166?
- ALT3 ... that the roof of the Church of St. Nicholas (pictured) in Kuršumlija, Serbia, was melted down for bullets?
Needs a fresh review.
- :REVIEW COMPLETED - The following has been checked in this review by Esemono
User appears to be first time nom so no QPQ needed- Article has 3681 characters of readable prose
- NPOV
- ALT 3 Hook is interesting, short enough and sourced with Refs 6
- Google translate seems to confirm the hook
- Hook is sourced to :here
- Every paragraph sourced
- Earwig @ Toolserver Copyvio Detector found no copyvio
GTG -- Esemono (talk)
- For what it's worth, I like ALT3 more than the other two. (Maybe if 2 had more context about the timing or the importance of the year? but 3 is G2G.) — LlywelynII 09:43, 30 November 2013 (UTC)