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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 12:09, 17 September 2015 (UTC)
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Sandi Peterson
edit- ... that within two years of the hiring of Sandi Peterson as Group Worldwide Chairman of Johnson & Johnson, the company doubled its number of women in executive leadership positions?
Created by EmilyvstheGorn (talk). Nominated by Yoninah (talk) at 08:06, 9 September 2015 (UTC).
- Long enough, new enough, neutral, QPQ done; no copying of other kids' homework from what I can see (some of the sources are unavailable); the only problem is the hook implies a relationship between her tenure as chairman and the increase in women executives, a connection that isn't clear in the article or source (it is made clear in another article linked from the source though [1]). Belle (talk) 16:02, 9 September 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for the heads-up, Belle. I added the new source to the article. Although you read the hook as a causal relationship, I didn't mean it that way. I thought it suggests that Sandi Peterson's hiring was the beginning of Johnson & Johnson's move to hire more and more women. Yoninah (talk) 18:11, 9 September 2015 (UTC)