- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Vaticidalprophet talk 03:59, 11 October 2023 (UTC)
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Sara Mérida
- ... that footballer Sara Mérida suffered four ACL injuries by the age of 21, retiring from playing for nearly a decade?
- ALT1: ... that after playing football, then serving as physiotherapist, for Espanyol Femení, Sara Mérida helped coach the team to promotion in 2022?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Halston (film)
5x expanded by Kingsif (talk). Self-nominated at 22:42, 24 September 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Sara Mérida; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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- weird grammar
QPQ: Done. |
Overall: @Kingsif: Good article, but i'm quite confused on the wording of these hooks. Can the grammar be imporved? Onegreatjoke (talk) 22:34, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
- @Onegreatjoke: How about:
- ALT0a ... that after footballer Sara Mérida had suffered four ACL injuries by the age of 21, she retired from playing for nearly a decade?
- ALT1a: ... that footballer Sara Mérida played for Espanyol Femení, was a physiotherapist for the club, and ultimately helped coach her former team to promotion in 2022?
- Kingsif (talk) 22:52, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
Those wordings are much better. Onegreatjoke (talk) 18:19, 6 October 2023 (UTC)
- Kingsif (talk) 22:52, 3 October 2023 (UTC)