Template:Did you know nominations/Schloss Weesenstein

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:21, 6 October 2015 (UTC)

Schloss Weesenstein

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Schloss Weesenstein

... that art from the Staatliche Kunstsammlungen Dresden stored in Schloss Weesenstein (pictured) was saved from destruction during the bombing of Dresden in World War II?

ALT1:... that three kings have lived in Schloss Weesenstein (pictured)?
Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Angera

Created by Yakikaki (talk). Self-nominated at 13:52, 6 September 2015 (UTC).

@Yakikaki: The article is long enough. New enough. Seems to be sourced well. I like the first hook, but I think it should be revised to:

... ALT2: ... that art stored in Schloss Weesenstein (pictured) was saved from destruction during the bombing of Dresden in World War II?

I think it's better that way. Excessive detail may not attract as much. Let me know what you think. Étienne Dolet (talk) 19:04, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

@EtienneDolet: Thanks for the review! Yes, it looks much better. I struggled with it a bit and I think you're right. Best regards, Yakikaki (talk) 19:38, 7 September 2015 (UTC)

In light of my review above, I approve ALT2. Étienne Dolet (talk) 19:40, 7 September 2015 (UTC)