Template:Did you know nominations/Serge Rezvani

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 12:42, 14 November 2019 (UTC)

Serge Rezvani

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Marie-José Nat in 2002

... that Serge Rezvani, who wrote a hit for Jeanne Moreau in the 1962 film Jules et Jim, married the actress Marie-José Nat (pictured) in 2005? Source: [1]

Reviewed: ~~to come~~
Comment: it's about her, intentionally

Created by LouisAlain (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 21:35, 19 October 2019 (UTC).

@Gerda Arendt: This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are cited inline, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright or plagiarism issues. There are several problems with the nomination, a QPQ still needs to be done, a citation is needed for her death and the image is ineligible because it does not appear in the article. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:49, 25 October 2019 (UTC)

Cwmhiraeth, I added the pic to his article, + a ref for her death, and reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Magha Puja. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:46, 30 October 2019 (UTC)

@Gerda Arendt: Thank you. Now I come to look again, I see we need a citation for the "Jules and Jim" hit song. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:16, 30 October 2019 (UTC)

I duplicated a ref to there. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:34, 30 October 2019 (UTC)

Thank you. This is good to go. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:55, 31 October 2019 (UTC)

Hi, I came by to promote this, but it really doesn't seem hooky to talk about who he married. Yoninah (talk) 14:38, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

I don't want to mention the knowing-she-would-die-soon-thing. Suggestions. This is a hook about her, repeating. Her article just couldn't be expanded 5*. I think the song-part is hooky, and the rest an extra. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:03, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

Well, you really don't say so much about her, so there's not much to work with. How about:
ALT1: ~~... that in 2005, multidisciplinary artist Serge Rezvani married the actress Marie-José Nat (pictured), whom he had first met 50 years before?~~ Yoninah (talk) 21:18, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

Well, why not? - For me, the hit song would be more interesting, though. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:22, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

Thanks. Pinging @Cwmhiraeth: for review of ALT1. Yoninah (talk) 22:31, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

They first met in the 1960s, so saying "fifty years before" is not really accurate. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:00, 11 November 2019 (UTC)

Cwmhiraeth: 1960s→2000s is 50 years. We could also say "half a century". Yoninah (talk) 11:53, 11 November 2019 (UTC)

Yoninah: 1960s→2005 is 35 to 45 years. You could say "nearly half a century earlier" I suppose, but "many decades earlier" would be better. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:55, 11 November 2019 (UTC)

Cwmhiraeth you can tell I'm an English major?
ALT2: ... that in 2005, multidisciplinary artist Serge Rezvani married the actress Marie-José Nat (pictured), whom he had first met nearly half a century before? Yoninah (talk) 19:16, 11 November 2019 (UTC)

ALT2 good to go. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:32, 11 November 2019 (UTC)