- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by SSTflyer 10:23, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
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Sharon Barker
edit... that Sharon Barker, co-founder of a private women's health center that provides abortions in Bangor, Maine, was named to a panel on reducing threats of violence at state abortion clinics?
- ALT1:
... that Sharon Barker, director of the Women's Resource Center at the University of Maine, brings 500 middle school students to campus each year to explore careers in the STEM fields?
Created by Yoninah (talk). Self-nominated at 14:13, 13 June 2016 (UTC).
- This article is new enough and long enough. The article is neutral and I detected no close-paraphrasing issues. The hook is not inaccurate, but should it not mention girls, who are the whole point of the project? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:21, 24 June 2016 (UTC)
- Do you mean we should just say "500 girls", or "500 middle school girls"? Yoninah (talk) 12:54, 24 June 2016 (UTC)
- "500 middle school girls" I would have thought. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:55, 24 June 2016 (UTC)
- OK. Here's an alt:
- ALT2: ... that Sharon Barker, director of the Women's Resource Center at the University of Maine, brings 500 middle school girls to campus each year to explore careers in the STEM fields? Yoninah (talk) 19:26, 25 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks. This nomination is ready to go with ALT2. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:51, 27 June 2016 (UTC)