Template:Did you know nominations/Sheetal Pandey

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The result was: promoted by Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 10:52, 21 November 2017 (UTC)

Sheetal Pandey

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Created by Fitindia (talk). Self-nominated at 07:58, 6 November 2017 (UTC).

  • New enough, long enough, neutrally written, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done.
  • The hook, though, is long and complicated. If you said it shorter, like: ... that Sheetal Pandey lost a 2006 by-election even though she had the support of her party's member of parliament? it's really not that interesting. The article is rather short on interesting biographical details which could help you compose a better hook; perhaps you can add some more information? Yoninah (talk) 22:11, 11 November 2017 (UTC)
@Yoninah: have added a hook. Please do have a look. Thank you  FITINDIA  06:33, 12 November 2017 (UTC)
  • Thank you, ALT2 works! Hook ref verified and cited inline. ALT2 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 11:40, 12 November 2017 (UTC)