- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:18, 11 March 2017 (UTC)
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Solomon Souza
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Spray-paint portrait of Jonathan Pollard
... that when the stalls of the Mahane Yehuda Market close, Solomon Souza's artwork (example pictured) appears?Source: "About a year ago this began to change as a street art gallery started to appear in the market. This gallery is visible in its entirety only on Saturdays, when large murals of famous personalities painted on the closed shutters appear." (The Times of Israel)
- Reviewed: William Hoapili Kaauwai
Created by E.M.Gregory (talk) and Yoninah (talk). Nominated by Yoninah (talk) at 10:59, 2 March 2017 (UTC).
Interesting artists, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. The image is licensed and almost a must in this case. - I am not happy with the hook, unless you want to promote knowing the name of the market. "Jerusalem shuk", as in a headline, seems a more attractive name for it, no? I find the number of art works also interesting, and/or that they are portraits. - Please check if on fact really needs four refs, and sort their numbers. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:42, 2 March 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. I cut down the number of cites on that sentence from 5 to 2. Regarding the name of the market, I agree that it should be "Jerusalem shuk", but the page has stood under this name for quite a long time. Actually, there's more than one shuk in Jerusalem, so this should be called the Mahane Yehuda shuk. Would you like a slightly different hook, such as:
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... that when the stalls of the Mahane Yehuda shuk close, Solomon Souza's spray-painted portraits of contemporary and historical figures (example pictured) become visible?Yoninah (talk) 23:10, 2 March 2017 (UTC) - Another image option:
Golda Meir portrait
- Thank you! I wonder if we can boldly pipe to the market name, and much prefer the Meir image, in women's month. With such a famous woman, we don't need to say who his "sitters" are ;)
- ALT2: ... that when the stalls of a Jerusalem shuk close, Solomon Souza's spray-painted portraits (example pictured) become visible? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:20, 3 March 2017 (UTC)
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thank you, strike others then, - and thank you for the image also! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:55, 4 March 2017 (UTC)
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