Template:Did you know nominations/Stephanie Goldner
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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 02:08, 26 March 2023 (UTC)
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Stephanie Goldner
Special case
- ... that a special case (pictured) was instrumental to Steffy Goldner's professional career? Source: Archives Exhibit on Phil’s First Woman Honors Project 19, The Special Case of Steffy Goldner
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Going Down Home with Daddy
- Comment: for Women's History Month
Created by Zeete (talk). Self-nominated at 15:17, 20 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Stephanie Goldner; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- This hook is way too vague, it needs to say that it's a harp case or that her career was as a harpist. But I love the play on words! What exactly made the case so special or instrumental though, other than that you need it to travel with the harp like any other instrument? Article length is good, but the structure is unusual: the career section mentions she followed her husband to Minneapolis, but this is duplicated (and now with a wikilink and the state) in the personal life. It's also reads a bit off with mixed timelines to read the career info first, then her birth and education later. How does the education fit into the touring as a youth? I'm also not so sure about using Spotify as a source for recordings, are there websites from the publishers of the tracks you can cite or anything else that can show comprehensiveness? Great topic overall – Cheers, Reywas92Talk 01:17, 21 March 2023 (UTC)
- Reywas92, thanks for the review. I've updated the article structure and the discography. I also updated the info on the case and propose a new hook:
- ALT1: ... that a special case (pictured) was instrumental to harpist Steffy Goldner's professional career and legacy?
