Template:Did you know nominations/Sumner station

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The result was: promoted by HaEr48 (talk) 08:31, 5 May 2018 (UTC)

Sumner station

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Sumner station
Sumner station

5x expanded by SounderBruce (talk). Self-nominated at 02:11, 30 April 2018 (UTC).

  • Article is long enough and had its prose section expanded more than five-fold on April 30. Article appears to meet core policies and guidelines, including neutrality and use of inline citations. Earwig detects no violation. QPQ completed. Photo is good quality and has appropriate license. The hook is short enough and interesting. But ... the hook says the kiln references "the city's historical hops industry", but the cited city newsletter says the kiln look was intended to "reflect the agricultural history and tradition of the Sumner Valley". The first cite also references "agricultural history" rather than an industry. This seems like a disconnect. Can you clarify? Cbl62 (talk) 18:00, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
  • @Cbl62: Some of the other offline sources use "hops industry", but I've changed the hook to agriculture. SounderBruce 23:31, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
  • @Cbl62: Pinging again, just to make sure this gets through. SounderBruce 06:24, 5 May 2018 (UTC)
  • This now looks ok. Cbl62 (talk) 06:27, 5 May 2018 (UTC)