- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:25, 14 December 2017 (UTC)
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Sung Hyang-sim
edit- ... that North Korean footballer Sung Hyang-sim has won the FIFA Silver Ball and the AFC Golden Ball? 1, 2
- Reviewed: Olga FitzGeorge
Created by The C of E (talk). Self-nominated at 20:04, 22 November 2017 (UTC).
- I will be reviewing this shortly. Thank you. Hmlarson (talk) 00:57, 29 November 2017 (UTC)
- Meets article requirements 1-3, but I'd like to suggest an alternative hook (or similar) as the current one is slightly inaccurate. Let me know what you think The C of E:
- ALT 1 ... that North Korean footballer Sung Hyang-sim was the top scorer at the 2017 AFC U-19 Women's Championship and named Most Valuable Player?
- Hmlarson (talk) 01:37, 29 November 2017 (UTC)
- @Hmlarson: Fine with me. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 08:27, 29 November 2017 (UTC)
- Another revision The C of E - better?
- ALT 2 ... that North Korean footballer Sung Hyang-sim was named Asian Young Footballer of the Year after she was the top scorer and Most Valuable Player at the 2017 AFC U-19 Women's Championship?
- Hmlarson (talk) 04:10, 2 December 2017 (UTC)
- If we do go with that, we don't bold AYFOTY as that is not part of the nomination. I have removed it. My question is are you reviewing? The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 10:22, 2 December 2017 (UTC)
- @Hmlarson: Fine with me. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 08:27, 29 November 2017 (UTC)
Article length and age are fine, no copyvio or plagiarism concerns, reliable sources are used. I prefer ALT 2 or ALT 1. The originally submitted hook should not be used due to accuracy. Hmlarson (talk) 19:17, 2 December 2017 (UTC)