Template:Did you know nominations/Taiiku Okazaki

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:18, 25 March 2019 (UTC)

Taiiku Okazaki

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  • ... that Taiiku Okazaki parodied tropes used in Japanese music videos in a song titled "Music Video"? Source: [1], [2]

Created by Narutolovehinata5 (talk). Self-nominated at 03:05, 13 March 2019 (UTC).

  • New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. Hook ref verified and cited inline. QPQ done. However, I think you should try to avoid the repetition in the hook by not naming the song; perhaps you could add a different detail like the fact that it became a viral hit. Yoninah (talk) 22:50, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
@Yoninah: What about:
ALT1 ... that a 2016 song by Taiiku Okazaki became a viral hit in Japan for parodying commonly-used tropes in Japanese music videos?
Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 23:31, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
@Yoninah: If the wording is the only thing left holding this nomination back, then go ahead. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 23:28, 14 March 2019 (UTC)
  • Sure. You know, I'll leave it to the prep promoter to choose among the options. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 14:07, 15 March 2019 (UTC)