- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:39, 8 April 2021 (UTC)
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Tara Downs
- ... that Tara Downs' first gallery was in a converted paintball studio? Source: "In Toronto, the three founders, all recent graduates from the Ontario College of Art and Design, opened up shop in a giant warehouse that used to be home to a paintball studio. (“It was pretty raw,” Downs said.)" (https://www.artnews.com/art-news/news/goodbye-to-yesterday-torontos-tomorrow-gallery-opens-in-new-york-2730/)
- Reviewed: Christina Adane
Created by TayaCornett (talk), Beccaynr (talk), and Ritchie333 (talk). Nominated by Ritchie333 (talk) at 21:13, 12 March 2021 (UTC).
Interesting life and work, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. I know you like hooks short, but I think this could be much more interesting and still short if you mentioned "Tomorrow Gallery" - which is a program, and much more interesting than "first gallery" which could be of anything. I'd go and mention that she opened that first in Toronto in a converted paintball studio, and then in New York, but your choice. (I like to give a person a time and a place ... hint, hint.) - If you think mentioning tomorrow might drive readers away, I'll approve the surprise package. - Suggestions for the article: avoid repetition of the NY location in the lead. I'd rather say that she also teaches. Avoid repetition of 2011 in founding and then saying "from 2011 to 2013". (Or do you need extra characters? No.) Try to integrate the one sentence about education in "Life and career", in chronology. Who cares at the end. - Thank you creators for another woman in women's month, - hope it will be displayed in March. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:20, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
- Gerda Arendt, Crikey, I'd completely forgotten about this. Beccaynr, since this is mostly your work, do you want to deal with the suggested hook changes?
- ALT1 ... that Tara Downs co-founded the Tomorrow Gallery in a converted paintball studio in Toronto, before moving to New York? Source: "In Toronto, the three founders, all recent graduates from the Ontario College of Art and Design, opened up shop in a giant warehouse that used to be home to a paintball studio." (https://www.artnews.com/art-news/news/goodbye-to-yesterday-torontos-tomorrow-gallery-opens-in-new-york-2730/) created ALT based on Gerda Arendt's suggestions. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 20:12, 7 April 2021 (UTC)
I like that one, would perhaps say "moved it" instead of just "moved". --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:15, 7 April 2021 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that Tara Downs co-founded the Tomorrow Gallery in a converted paintball studio in Toronto, before moving to New York? Source: "In Toronto, the three founders, all recent graduates from the Ontario College of Art and Design, opened up shop in a giant warehouse that used to be home to a paintball studio." (https://www.artnews.com/art-news/news/goodbye-to-yesterday-torontos-tomorrow-gallery-opens-in-new-york-2730/) created ALT based on Gerda Arendt's suggestions. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 20:12, 7 April 2021 (UTC)
- Gerda Arendt, Crikey, I'd completely forgotten about this. Beccaynr, since this is mostly your work, do you want to deal with the suggested hook changes?
