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The Naked Monster

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5x expanded by MichaelQSchmidt (talk), Dr. Blofeld (talk). Self nom at 05:29, 7 August 2011 (UTC) Mostly looks good, but article needs some copyediting before it can be used. Anaxial (talk) 16:42, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
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Have revisted the article and addressed spelling and mangled sentences. Schmidt, MICHAEL Q. 21:27, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
Looks like all my concerns about the prose have been fixed. In the meantime, somebody had nominated the article for deletion, though, and that process will have to be resolved. No issues from me, though. Anaxial (talk) 18:50, 12 August 2011 (UTC)