Template:Did you know nominations/There's a Honey

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The result was: promoted by Z1720 (talk) 17:33, 19 July 2022 (UTC)

There's a Honey

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Heather Baron-Gracie of Pale Waves

... that Pale Waves's debut single, "There's a Honey", was produced by Matthew Healy and George Daniel of the pop rock band the 1975? Source: "Pale Waves ... got [the 1975] band members Matty Healy and George Daniel to help produce debut single ‘There’s A Honey’" (NME)
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Improved to Good Article status by Gen. Quon (talk). Self-nominated at 15:52, 5 June 2022 (UTC).

Note: I can also work in a link to Heather Baron-Gracie if that would make this better.--Gen. Quon_[Talk]^{(I'm studying Wikipedia!)} 16:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

Article has achieved Good Article status. No issues of copyvio or plagiarism. All sources appear reliable. QPQ is done. Hook is interesting and sourced. Does the official name of the song include quotation marks? Thriley (talk) 06:18, 6 June 2022 (UTC)

Not sure how I forgot that all songs have quotes around them on here! Thriley (talk) 06:28, 6 June 2022 (UTC)

Hi, Gen. Quon! And Thriley – I've got some ALTs for y'all to consider :) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 09:48, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
ALT1: ... that no song in 2017 reportedly matched the debut single of Pale Waves "in terms of sky-kissing '90s-style alt-rock majesty"?
- theleekycauldron These are good! What about ALT1a: ... that no song in 2017 reportedly matched the "sky-kissing '90s-style alt-rock majesty" of Pale Waves's debut single, "There's a Honey"?
  - @Theleekycauldron: Was there anything else I need to do for this? I'm still a newbie when it comes to the intricacies of DYK, haha. Fwiw, I think that my tweaked Alt1a (inspired by your idea) is better than my initial suggestion.--Gen. Quon_[Talk]^{(I'm studying Wikipedia!)} 16:46, 22 June 2022 (UTC)
    - Hey, Gen. Quon! Sorry this fell off of my radar... We'll need a reviewer back here (possibly Thriley, and I'll ping Narutolovehinata5 as well) to approve ALT1 and ALT1a (I agree, quite good :D), and then we'll be good for promotion! theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 00:57, 23 June 2022 (UTC)
      - theleekycauldron Was there anything else i needed to do here? I personally like this hook better than my original of 2a, but that's just me.--Gen. Quon_[Talk]^{(I'm studying Wikipedia!)} 16:55, 2 July 2022 (UTC)
        @Gen. Quon: I'm pretty sure we're good on this... (sorry I've been putting off your follow-ups, I promise I've got a response in the works!) I'll ping Z1720 to see if they can sneak this into a set. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 01:03, 3 July 2022 (UTC)
        @Theleekycauldron: responding to the above ping: I already filled an image hook in the prep set I'm creating, so I can't give a slot for this. However, it is still on the approved list so it will be placed in a prep set in due course. Z1720 (talk) 01:12, 3 July 2022 (UTC)
ALT2: ... that Matthew Healy and George Daniel of the 1975 helped produce Pale Waves's debut single, "There's a Honey", and made it "sonically bigger"?
- ALT2a: ... that Matthew Healy and George Daniel of the 1975 helped make Pale Waves's debut single, "There's a Honey", "sonically bigger"?

As Thriley is the original reviewer I'll leave the final approval to them, but I think ALT2a has a better punch than the other proposals. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 01:02, 23 June 2022 (UTC)

ALT2a reads really well. Looks all set! Thriley (talk) 01:07, 23 June 2022 (UTC)

Since Thriley gave their go-ahead, I'm approving ALT2a. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 01:12, 23 June 2022 (UTC)