- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:44, 29 April 2014 (UTC)
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Torrey C. Brown
edit- ... that Maryland Delegate Torrey C. Brown, a physician, once assisted in saving the life of a fellow legislator who suffered a heart attack during a debate?
Created by Marylandstater (talk). Self nominated at 02:40, 28 April 2014 (UTC).
- There may be a few close paraphrasing issues as per [1]. It's pretty minor, but as we're talking the main page would be good for Marylandstater (talk · contribs) to double check it. Also not happy with the fair use rationale for the photo within the article. Not having another photo of the subject is not a strong enough fair use rationale. Other than that meets the criteria. Appropriate length, new, and doesn't violate BLP (recently deceased biography). I would make one suggestion though.
Alt1 hook – ... that Maryland Delegate Torrey C. Brown, a physician, once assisted in saving the life of a fellow legislator who suffered a heart attack during a debate?
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- Done: I corrected the paraphrasing issues, removed the questioned photo and used the alternate hook that was suggested. Thanks for your help! «Marylandstater» «reply» 13:04, 28 April 2014 (UTC)
Great. Alt hook is being used. -- Shudde talk 09:20, 29 April 2014 (UTC)
