Template:Did you know nominations/Umaid Bhawan Palace
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 14:30, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
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Umaid Bhawan Palace
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Umaid Bhawan Palace
... that when the Umaid Bhawan Palace (pictured) opened its gilded doors in 1943 it was considered as one of the largest royal residences in the world?
- ALT1:
... that the Umaid Bhawan Palace (pictured) was built by Umaid Singh to provide employment to farmers during a famine? - Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Kerala State Film Award for Best Actress
- ALT1:
5x expanded by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 01:51, 1 October 2015 (UTC).
@Nvvchar: I strongly prefer ALT1 and would suggest you strike the main hook, as "gilded" is non-neutral and "considered" as one of the largest royal residences is a bizarre wording, as it either is or it isn't. For ALT1, everything is good to go, as the image is fine and free, the hook is cited, interesting, and neutral, and the hook meets formatting guidelines. 5x expansion accepted. Once again, good to go for ALT1 only. Johanna (formerly BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 02:41, 22 October 2015 (UTC)
@Nvvchar: I think the hook would be stronger if you add that it provided employment to "thousands" of farmers. That fact would need an inline cite in the article. Yoninah (talk) 21:49, 25 October 2015 (UTC)
- Yoninah Thanks for the review suggestion. Here is the Alt2 hook:
- ALT2: ... that the Umaid Bhawan Palace (pictured) was constructed in 1928 to assist famine-stricken farmers by employing 2,000 to 3,000 people as builders?Nvvchar. 02:17, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
