Template:Did you know nominations/United States Marine Hospital (Lahaina, Hawaii)

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 19:12, 21 August 2023 (UTC)

United States Marine Hospital (Lahaina, Hawaii)

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... that the Lahaina U.S. Marine Hospital was destroyed twice: in the 1970s due to neglect, and then by the 2023 Hawaii wildfires? Source: [1] [2]
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Created by Antony-22 (talk). Self-nominated at 23:21, 18 August 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/United States Marine Hospital (Lahaina, Hawaii); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

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QPQ: Done.

Overall: Long enough and new enough with copyright violations. Everything is reliably verified. The hook is cited and interesting. SL93 (talk) 02:31, 20 August 2023 (UTC)

@SL93 and Antony-22: I cannot see that citation 11 supports the sentence about "disintegration" preceding it. Bruxton (talk) 13:10, 20 August 2023 (UTC)

Bruxton I see it. "Tester said the rock and coral building is in danger of disintegration". As for the 1970 part, the article is from 1970. SL93 (talk) 16:46, 20 August 2023 (UTC)

@SL93 and Antony-22: Thanks and welcome back! I had such trouble finding that. If anyone needs to confirm it is at the end of paragraph 8 in source. Bruxton (talk) 19:07, 20 August 2023 (UTC)

I am not sure the sources support the hook's claim of "destroyed" however. Bruxton (talk) 19:08, 20 August 2023 (UTC)

Bruxton I'm not sure what you mean. Maybe use the word "damaged" which is true on both counts. SL93 (talk) 19:22, 20 August 2023 (UTC)

ALT0a ... that the Lahaina U.S. Marine Hospital was damaged twice: in the 1970s due to neglect, and then by the 2023 Hawaii wildfires? Bruxton (talk) 20:04, 20 August 2023 (UTC)

"Damaged" doesn't quite capture it. The first time it had completely collapsed into a pile of rubble (see [3] and [4]). The second time everything burned except the exterior stone walls. I think that "destroyed" is a more reasonable description. Antony–22 (^talk⁄_contribs) 23:52, 20 August 2023 (UTC)

@Antony-22: Fair enough. Bruxton (talk) 19:10, 21 August 2023 (UTC)