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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 14:03, 7 November 2012 (UTC)

Waging Heavy Peace: A Hippie Dream

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Created/expanded by The Interior (talk). Self nom at 20:51, 4 November 2012 (UTC)

* Looks fine to me. A few comments: 1) Reference needed for Zeke also having cerebal palsy as he isn't mentioned in the reference for that statement. 2) Not sure source supports statement that Broken Arrow "features prominently". 3) Ref for "early time in Canada" sentence? Otherwise it looks fine, I saw no copyvio, quotes were correctly used, looks fine to me. If you can address the three points above it should be absolutely fine to go. Mabalu (talk) 04:00, 5 November 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for the review. Ref redux: 1) Zeke, cerebral palsy now reffed to NYT, Carr: "Zeke, Young’s son by Snodgress, has a very mild case of cerebral palsy and works at Home Depot." 2) Between the first NYT ref "Mr. Young lives on his Broken Arrow ranch, a virtual fief full of friends and employees who help him with the pet projects that occupy much of his attention", and the Carr piece, sense of place seems to be an element. I'll remove "prominently". (As you might gather, I haven't read the book yet). 3) Now reffed to Times Picayune: "In his writing, he returns to Canada in the '60’s, and his vivid memories of touring with his first band, the Squires." The Interior (Talk) 04:37, 5 November 2012 (UTC)
Good to go. Mabalu (talk) 12:00, 5 November 2012 (UTC)
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