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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:27, 2 May 2018 (UTC)
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Wendreda
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118-angel roof at St Wendreda's Church, March
- ... that Saint Wendreda is celebrated by a roof with 118 angels (pictured)?
Source: Barbara Joanne Williams, Britain Our Way (1995), p. 64
- Reviewed: Queen Mamea
Created by Moonraker (talk). Self-nominated at 04:53, 15 April 2018 (UTC).
Interesting, the little bits we know, on good sources, offline sources AGF, no copyvio obvious. The image is licensed, but I suggest to crop it - we need to see at least one angel. Hook: I thought we speak of a church, and looking at the article, I still thought the same, not of a woman. To avoid that, you might add an infobox to the article, and say something (such as "the nun and healer") in the hook to make it clearly a person. How about saying 118 angels? I first thought angel roof was an architecture term ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:03, 17 April 2018 (UTC)
- No problem, I have added an Infobox and cropped the image. There's no ambiguity in English, as the church would be St Wendreda's. Moonraker (talk) 00:59, 19 April 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you, the tweaked hook is also approved, and the cropped image. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 05:58, 19 April 2018 (UTC)
This is ready to be promoted, but it feels like the hook is too vague: how about mentioning that the roof is in her only church? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:35, 2 May 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you, the tweaked hook is also approved, and the cropped image. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 05:58, 19 April 2018 (UTC)
- No problem, I have added an Infobox and cropped the image. There's no ambiguity in English, as the church would be St Wendreda's. Moonraker (talk) 00:59, 19 April 2018 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that in the one church dedicated to Saint Wendreda, the roof is decorated with 118 angels (pictured)?
Source: Barbara Joanne Williams, Britain Our Way (1995), p. 64
- ALT1 ... that in the one church dedicated to Saint Wendreda, the roof is decorated with 118 angels (pictured)?
How is that, Narutolovehinata5? The page cited still covers the new hook. Moonraker (talk) 00:42, 2 May 2018 (UTC)
- Much better hook: restoring Moonraker's tick. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:42, 2 May 2018 (UTC)