Template:Did you know nominations/Werner J. Dannhauser

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The result was: promoted by Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 08:20, 29 July 2022 (UTC)

Werner J. Dannhauser

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• ... that before he became a political philosophy professor, Werner J. Dannhauser helped change the political direction of Commentary magazine? Source: see footnotes 3 and 15 in article
  • ALT1: ... that it took political philosopher professor Werner J. Dannhauser a long time to get his Ph.D.? Source: see footnotes 12 and 13 in article and general narrative
  • ALT2: ... that political philosophy professor Werner J. Dannhauser was the basis for a character in a Saul Bellow novel? Source: see footnotes 30 and 31 in article
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Jim Pappin

Created by Wasted Time R (talk). Self-nominated at 10:33, 13 July 2022 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Thank you for this interesting article. New enough, long enough, well sourced, copy bio unlikely, I'd prefer the original hook or ALT2. I couldn't find a source for the Zion Memorial Park Cemetery, would be good if you add that. Else, I'd say it is good to go. Paradise Chronicle (talk) 06:57, 19 July 2022 (UTC)

@Paradise Chronicle: Thanks very much for doing the review. I have added the cite for the sentence in question (and made a few other minor additions/adjustments). Wasted Time R (talk) 01:20, 20 July 2022 (UTC)

Thank you. I saw that one too, but I couldn't source the cemetery to Bedford Hights. Now I doublechecked and it is in Bedford hights. Thank you also for the additional adjustments. I'd say its ready to go.Paradise Chronicle (talk) 09:26, 20 July 2022 (UTC)