- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Montanabw(talk) 06:45, 26 June 2016 (UTC)
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Wesley P. Lloyd
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Wesley P. Lloyd 1926
- ... that Wesley P. Lloyd served a mission for the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints under B. H. Roberts in 1929?
- ALT1:... that Wesley P. Lloyd was the dean at the United States International University and later became the director of California Western College?
- Reviewed: Aplets & Cotlets
Created by Amgisseman(BYU) (talk). Self-nominated at 19:43, 7 June 2016 (UTC).
This article is new enough and long enough. The image is suitably licensed, the article is neutral and I detected no policy issues. The original hook facts are not borne out by reference 4, and ALT1 does not provide inline citations for its hook facts. A DYK requirement is that there must be an inline citation for the actual sentence containing the fact(s) not just one at the end of the paragraph. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:13, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
- Cwmhiraeth Thank you for your review. However, reference 4 does support the hook. The article states: "Elder Roberts spoke with Wesley P. Lloyd, one of his former missionaries in the Eastern States Mission." The article also states that Roberts was the president of the mission; therefore, Lloyd would have served a mission under B.H. Roberts. I can reword both the hook and the article if you think it is necessary. I did realize that I did not include the URL to the following sentence that includes the year he served, so I added that in. Both facts are supported. I do agree that there were no citations for ALT1, and I have added them in.Amgisseman(BYU) (talk) 19:14, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Thank you! Either hook could be used as both now have inline citations. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:23, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
