- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 01:48, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
Ye Shiwen
edit... that female Chinese swimmer Ye Shiwen's times at the 2012 Summer Olympics have been compared to those of Ryan Lochte?
- Comment: To be honest, I've probably missed out contributors here - this was a real team effort as there were plenty of different editors who came in and just made a couple of tweaks to the article, I'm nominating this on behalf of all their work.
Created/expanded by Uncle G (talk), Zanhe (talk), Trickinho (talk), Sevilledade (talk). Nominated by Miyagawa (talk) at 18:11, 3 August 2012 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that 16-year-old Chinese swimmer Ye Shiwen won two gold medals and broke two records at the 2012 Summer Olympics? -Zanhe (talk) 03:36, 20 August 2012 (UTC)
Still reviewing 5X expansion, check. 1,500-character minimum, check. Early Life section well-referenced. More to come... --George Ho (talk) 14:35, 23 August 2012 (UTC)
I have doubts about relevancy of including some swimmer from 800 meter swimming race, which Ye Shiwen did not particapate. Nevertheless, this proves sufficient expansion if other comparison may not do. Also, all other passages are well-written and well-referenced, even when a few minor details are not easy (but not hard) to verify, like men's race competition. --George Ho (talk) 16:21, 23 August 2012 (UTC)
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AlthoughI like ALT1 more than original hook, both are fine. I'll leave this official decision to promoter. --George Ho (talk) 16:23, 23 August 2012 (UTC)- I would strongly recommend ALT1. Ye Shiwen's performance at the London Olympics (two golds, two records) was extraordinary and far more relevant than the comparison with Lochte. It should be noted that the original hook was written before she won the second gold and broke the second record. -Zanhe (talk) 22:25, 23 August 2012 (UTC)
