- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 07:41, 17 October 2014 (UTC)
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Yehuda Green
edit- ... that Shlomo Carlebach-style singer Yehuda Green once performed on stage with his long-deceased mentor?
- ALT1:... that Hasidic singer Yehuda Green, who performs in the style of legendary musician Shlomo Carlebach, has been called "more Carlebach than Carlebach"?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Heather Dewey-Hagborg
Created by Yoninah (talk). Self nominated at 13:27, 14 October 2014 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, QPQ done, etc. Good to go. The one thing I would suggest nom consider is tweaks to the hook -- first; delete "long-deceased". It makes it sound as though his mentor was long-dead during the performance. Also, I think that "once" is not needed, as it appears it happened more than once. Epeefleche (talk) 23:32, 15 October 2014 (UTC)
- @Epeefleche: thanks for the review. I don't quite understand what you want me to change here. Shlomo Carlebach died in 1994 and the on-stage duet was held in 2011. That accounts for "long-deceased". I'm not aware of any other times that Green did such a thing, so I don't understand what's wrong with "once". Truly, I was just trying to be hooky with the first hook. If you object, ALT1 is a more sedate option. Yoninah (talk) 19:37, 16 October 2014 (UTC)
- Ah -- I see. I was focused on the prior mention in the article of him singing with SC while he was alive. And I see ... there is only one mention of him performing with him in a virtual manner. And I understand the desire to make it hooky. Works. Good to go. Epeefleche (talk) 21:19, 16 October 2014 (UTC)
