Template:Did you know nominations/Yifat Bitton

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:06, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

Yifat Bitton

Prof. Bitton
Prof. Bitton

Created by Hydromania (talk). Self-nominated at 08:26, 3 July 2019 (UTC).

First DYK so no QPQ required
Article created by Hydromania on June 28, 2019 with 1691 characters (281 words) "readable prose size"
NPOV
Original Hook is interesting, short enough and sourced with Hebrew language Refs
Hook is sourced to
  • Attorney Yifat Biton, who was born and raised in the city, was presented last week as a candidate for a Supreme Court justices [1]
  • Bitton was shortlisted twice for Israel's Supreme Court ... making history as the youngest woman to ever appear on the list [2]
  • Bitton has been shortlisted twice for Israel’s Supreme Court (2016, 2018), making history as the youngest woman to ever appear on the list[3]
Every paragraph sourced
Earwig @ Toolserver Copyvio Detector found no copyvio
GTG -- Thats Just Great (talk) 16:23, 29 July 2019 (UTC)
  • Hi, I came by to promote this, but frankly, I don't see what's hooky about any of the hooks. Can't you say something about what she actually achieved? Yoninah (talk) 22:54, 30 July 2019 (UTC)
  • ALT3 ... that in addition to founding the Tmurah Anti-discrimination center, which fights for the rights of women who have suffered abuse, Prof. Yifat Bitton was also twice shortlisted for Israel's supreme court?
  • Thank you, that's better. But I think it should be tightened, and the spelling of the name corrected. How about:
  • ALT3a: ... that in addition to founding Tmura, an anti-discrimination center that advocates for the rights of women who have suffered abuse, Yifat Bitton was shortlisted for Israel's Supreme Court twice? Yoninah (talk) 17:01, 1 August 2019 (UTC)
  • Thank you. New hook fact in ALT3a verified and cited inline; other hook ref AGF and cited inline. Rest of review per Thats Just Great. ALT3a good to go. Yoninah (talk) 18:36, 1 August 2019 (UTC)