Template:Did you know nominations/al-Battani

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The result was: promoted by Cielquiparle (talk) 12:56, 10 March 2023 (UTC)

al-Battani

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• ... that al-Battani is considered to be the greatest and most famous of the known astronomers of the medieval Islamic world? Source: Citations 10-12
  • ALT1: ... that al-Battani was one the first astronomers to observe that the distance between the Earth and the Sun varies during the year? Source: Citations 3, 17-18
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/The Sims 4
  • Comment: quite a lot of hooks that could come from this article.

Improved to Good Article status by Amitchell125 (talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke (talk) at 21:28, 1 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/al-Battani; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Recent GA article is very well sourced and has no issues. The sources in the article verify the hook (for example Ref 3 says he "is regarded as the best and most famous astronomer of Medieval Islam"). @Onegreatjoke: The only tweak I would make might be shortening ALT0, I don't think it's necessary to specify "of the known astronomers" since unknown astronomers can't be famous. That's not necessary though since it's well within length limits either way. Otherwise both hooks are very interesting! BuySomeApples (talk) 01:48, 4 March 2023 (UTC)