Template talk:Did you know nominations/Killing of Richard Ward
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Storye book in topic Hook modifications
Hook modifications
edit- ... that following the killing of Richard Ward by a Colorado sheriff's deputy, the deputy was awarded for the injuries he allegedly sustained during the incident? [2023-03-22 at 17:21:22, by Cielquiparle]
- ... that following the killing of Richard Ward by a Colorado sheriff's deputy, the deputy received an award for the injuries he allegedly sustained during the incident? [2023-03-22 at 17:22:40, by Cielquiparle]
GalliumBot (talk • contribs) (he/it) 17:25, 22 March 2023 (UTC)
- I approve this change; the new wording is acceptable, and does not change the meaning or content. Storye book (talk) 20:55, 22 March 2023 (UTC)
Hook modifications
edit- ... that following the killing of Richard Ward by a Colorado sheriff's deputy, the deputy received an award for the injuries he allegedly sustained during the incident? [2023-03-23 at 16:58:24, by Ravenpuff]
- ... that following the killing of Richard Ward by a Colorado sheriff's deputy, the deputy received an award for the injuries that he allegedly sustained during the incident? [2023-03-23 at 17:11:14, by Ravenpuff]
GalliumBot (talk • contribs) (he/it) 17:25, 23 March 2023 (UTC)
- I approve the addition of "that". Storye book (talk) 20:05, 23 March 2023 (UTC)