Template talk:POTD/2009-07-24

Because Venus is obscured by clouds...

I understand that this is related to the runaway greenhouse effect and several other factors, but it doesn't seem right to me that we attribute Venus's atmospheric pressure to its cloud cover. Nevermind, I figured out that the sentence is "Because A, B, and C, we need radar...etc etc". Would moving the "No probe has..." bit to the beginning of the sentence help readability, or just ruin the rhythm of the prose?Quietmarc (talk) 01:17, 24 July 2009 (UTC)