Hi Ashleigh! I thought the first part of your article was really well written and interesting. I know you haven't gone live yet, so my comments may be premature...I thought the second paragraph about how it got on the agenda to be confusing and out of place. Maybe because you are updating an existing page? Or maybe it just needs a different title. Hope this helps Coharris (talk) 23:44, 12 April 2013 (UTC)Coharris
Hey! This is for Policy Analysis Assignment.WCUTHROWS (talk) 00:31, 30 January 2013 (UTC)