After rereading the "Atlantic hurricane season" article many times, I have come to find some of its strengths and weaknesses. I recognize that the article gives a lot of information even if it is not the longest article. Every question that I could have thought of was answered in the subtopics that are present. However, I did notice the lack of pictures after the first section of the article. Images add another aspect to an article and makes it more enjoyable to read and look at. They are also used to support what the article is saying. Even so, I decided that there was something more important that should be added to the article. I felt that it lacked a sense of compassion with the reader. I think that adding in the destruction that hurricanes cause could really pull the audience in even more. So, for my contributions, I decided that I will add two sentences explaining the detrimental effects of hurricanes. In doing so, I hope the article is more intriguing and engaging to the reader.
Article: Atlantic hurricane season
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