Potential Articles

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  • Goo Goo Dolls [[1]]
  • Blue Ridge Parkway [[2]]
  • The Glass Castle [[3]]
  • Isadora Duncan [[4]]
  • Sharon Springs, New York [[5]]

Example Articles

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  • Ima Hogg [[6]]
  • Valley View (Romney, West Virginia) [[7]]
  • Zion National Park [[8]]

Significant Edits in Blue Ridge Parkway Article

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Original version of the article was a single paragraph, so a large number of organizational changes were made.

  • Sections and table of contents added
  • Photographs added to appropriate sections
  • Table of information added for quick reference
  • Introduction made more concise and general (changes still needed)
  • Organization of "Route Description" adjusted so that more important and general information comes before more specific information
  • Some sections deleted or merged into other sections

Significant Edits in Isadora Duncan Article

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Original version of the article contained only Duncan's date of birth and nickname.

  • First section added was "Personal Life"
  • "Personal Life" section was split into 2 sections: "Personal Life" and "Later Life"
  • A new section, "Career," was added, and much of the content from "Personal Life" was moved into it
  • A "Miscellaneous" section was added, but was quickly removed due to irrelevance
  • "References" section added
  • Section titled "Death" designated to her absurd death
  • Photographs added, and then organized in a more balanced, smooth way