Article Evaluation:
Paragraph 1 some grammatical errors
Hard to read/doesn't flow
Origin has stuff about today's world and Pharos (which should be in the pharos section)
Construction talks about Alexander the Great's death
Adding to Article:
Was known as the most powerful artificial light in the ancient world.
The light from the lighthouse of Alexandria not only warned ships away from the dangerous coastline, but it was a welcome beacon for weary travelers. It stood a symbol of promise of safety and of survival.
Stood guard outside of the busy port of Alexandria
The lighthouse shone for nearly 1700 years before it was badly damaged a series of earthquakes
In search of history: Seven wonders of the world [Video file]. (1997). Retrieved November 4, 2017, from https://fod.infobase.com/PortalPlaylists.aspx?wID=11854&xtid=42739
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