Biography

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About Me

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My name is Nicholas Wiley, and I am a Christian. I grew up in the church. I go to school at Everett Community College. I can play basketball, soccer, flag football and I run. I did do cross country my seventh grade, sophomore and junior year. I did do the DECA club in high school. I played the piano for over eleven years, the guitar and the tenor saxophone for one year, the trombone for six years. My hobbies are working out, playing the piano, reading the Bible, playing adventure quest worlds, cooking, baking, toasting my bread to make delicious garlic bread[1] and working.

My Wikipedia Interests

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I am interested in being a volunteer for doing Biographies on conservative, Christian Artists. I hope to accomplish at least 10 Biographies as a volunteer. 

Article Evalution

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I visited the Reach Records article on Wikipedia and found three aspects of it worth commenting on, is anything left out of the article that should be there, are there grammar errors, or informal language, and is the article up to date?

Is anything left out of the article that should be there?

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Some things are left out of the article that should be there. The things that are left out are the name of each song and album by each artist and more things are left out, also. There is missing how the artist comes up, like Hulvey, who grew up in a trailer. He also dropped out of college to pursue music full time and used to make non-Christian rap in college, but God told him to delete all of his non-Christian music. Even though it was hard, he chose to do it for the glory of God. Hulvey also dropped the Christopher album which hit number eight on the Billboard Top Christian Gospel Albums Chart. The article also is missing the single "Reasons" by Hulvey featuring Lecrae and Svrcina. This article doesn't include any references of any interviews, but YouTube is a reliable source of information when it comes to Christian artists making music and where did they come from.

Are there grammar errors or informal language?

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There are no grammar errors or informal language.

Is the article up to date?

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The article is not up to date because the album by Hulvey "Christopher " has dropped. Lecrae has also dropped other music with 1k Phew and they forgot to include the streaming platforms that each artist is available on. They also forgot the song that Hulvey collaborated on with Andy Mineo which is the song "We against the World".

Conclusion

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In conclusion, even though that the article does have things missing that is very important. I find this article an eight out of ten only because the article is not up to date and there are things that are left out of the article that should be there like the Christopher that hit number eight on Top Christian Album Chart.

References

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Garlic Bread Recipe | Rachael Ray | Food Network

  1. ^ "How to make Garlic Bread on Your Toaster (Yes, On)". Spoon University.{{cite web}}: CS1 maint: url-status (link)