BlueRoseDrip

Bio

About Me

I am a college student studying for my future career as a registered nurse. When I was growing up, I wanted to be a veterinarian because I was really into animals at the time, then realized I had more flaws in helping people. My interests are watching horror movies, playing video games, reading, listening to music, drawing, sleeping, and classic GT-R35. I asked some of my friends to describe me and most of them said I am kind, caring, smart, and a good cook. How they described me is all true. The only person that brings the worst in me is my sibling. Thank you for taking the time to visit my user page.

My Wikipedia Interests

An interest would be Palm Springs, California. A popular resort for many years, also known for their natural hot springs, hotels, restaurants, golf courses, and hot weather. It's within the Colorado Desert's Coachella Valley where it is 110 degrees in the summer. I would want to spend some months vacationing with no electronics, just reading a Stephan King novel.

Article Evaluation

I visited the 'Black Death' article on Wikipedia (also known as the Pestilence, the Great Mortality, or the Plague), and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: grammar, structure, and citations.

Grammar

Article itself looks neutral. The bias claims were evidence about the plague in the fourteenth century. Within the article, there were no grammar errors nor informal language. Tense and aspect showed whether the statement refers mostly to the past or future verbs. Conjunctions also play a part in the article that connect to clauses and concepts.

Structure

This article is written out perfectly with statistics and has deep research from when it first was found. It mainly talks about the plague epidemics, traumatic events, different signs & symptoms, causes, and consequences. Black Plague is over-represented. I figure its only over-represented because it's an illness and also a medical research found in the 1340's. One irrelevant section would be the 'Early theory'.

Citations

The 'Black Death' article has many sources of past deaths and origins. Sources were found in CNN, history websites, medical records, BBC, other articles, news, and library books. Most facts of citations have very reliable sources but a few were not perfectly inserted as an MLA style, instead just authors' last names and years. The citations didn't seem biased at all. Looking at the link, they were not entirely dead because half of the page of citations were recent from the 2000's to 2020's.

Conclusion

Overall, I'd rate this page as "good". The page itself was well written with reliable evidence and explanations about "Black Death". It shows they created reliable sources which benefit the research and its state of origin.