Daihiep190201

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Bio

About me

Welcome to my user page,

My name is Hiep, I am from Vietnam. I was born and lived in Buon Ma Thuot city, Dak Lak province, Vietnam. It's in Central Highland in Vietnam. I moved to the United States of America when I was 15 years old. My family have 5 people, and I have one older sister and one little brother. My passion are soccer, volleyball, and badminton. During the soccer match I usually play goalkeeper and I used to play for Varsity at Cascade High School for 2 years.

Since my passion is soccer, I will research mostly about soccer players, player market, history and different soccer teams. My end goals is to share the understanding and passion about soccer with readers.^[1]

My Wikipedia interest

Wikipedia is top of my study materials. I usually use it as a base for my research or my study. The parts which I am interested in on this website are related to history, soccer and mechanical. I chose Mechanical Engineering for my major so I need to do lots of research about it. I'm interested in learning about fabrication techniques, material science, and engineering physics. I hope to accomplish as a volunteer that gives me the opportunity to gain experience, improve my skill and build wall confidence for myself to achieve my goal prospects.

Thank you for visiting my user page, Hiep Tran

Article Evaluation

"I visited the soccer article on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: structure, citations, and grammar."

Wikipedia cites that I chose based on my soccer hobby. I would like to know more info about the career of a soccer coach. So I ended up with Alex Ferguson page. He is the longest-serving manager of Manchester United. With his long term career, his wikipedia page is full with overload information in structure, citations and grammar.

Citations

There are almost a full page of the citations in Alex Ferguson page. Looking through the list of the citations, mostly from the news report during the games and after the games, interviews, and news about signing contracts with soccer players. These citations are more reliable and trustworthy sources. I’ve noticed that most of the citations are from BBC Sport News. BBC Sport News is a truthful source for sports news, the news always updating daily sport-news.

Age

Based on the citation, the article is up to date and which is September 30,2020.

Structure

For Alex Ferguson page, it has the same outline structure compared with other wikipedia pages. For example, the first section introduces Alex in summary and more general information. The interesting part of Alex page was in the introduction part, it listed all the awards that he earned in his career term. In addition, the content of his page was very well organized starting from early life to career statistics.

Grammar

Alex Ferguson is an famous soccer player and coach with a long-term career life which made his page as a professional page. Reading through the page, I wasn't able to find an error. Since this page is about sport which the language uses in this page Soccer language which might be confusing for readers who are not in sport.

Summary

Overall, this page is a perfect example for a professional page because of the citations, organized structure and no grammatical errors.References

^ American Heart Association News (July 6,2018). "The health benefits of soccer aren't just for elite players facing off in the World Cup". American Heart Association. Retrieved October 17,2020. {{cite web}}: Check date values in: |access-date= and |date= (help)CS1 maint: url-status (link)

[1] American Heart Association News (July 6,2018). "The health benefits of soccer aren't just for elite players facing off in the World Cup". American Heart Association. Retrieved October 17,2020. {{cite web}}: Check date values in: |access-date= and |date= (help)CS1 maint: url-status (link)

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