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Page: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charles_E._Smith_Jewish_Day_School Charles E. Smith Jewish Day School Evaluation:
Strengths - The page displays a lot of historical information about the schools history. It covers years in which the buildings were built, donors who gave money to help with the construction. It also gives a solid list of co-curricular activities that the school offers.
Weaknesses - I would say the page can be viewed slightly as an advertisement for the school. It doesn't go into much detail about the dual curriculum which is what makes this school so unique. It talks about the schools literary awards, which even I didn't know was a thing, and I went to the school. It almost feels as though the page too positively casts the school. However, it does list a notable alumni as a convicted murderer so it could go either way.
What I contributed: There is nothing mentioned about winning sports teams at CESJDS. We have tons of banners that are hung up in our gymnasium, yet none of our sporting history is on the wiki page. I posted what I could find about our winning teams, and our sports history. My edits:
"PVAC Championship Teams:
- 2016-2017: Mens Varsity Basketball defeated Sandy Spring Friends School 76-65 in PVAC Championship [9]
- 2007-2008: Mens Varsity Basketball [10]"