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Editing Benedetto Bonfigli
The background on Benedetto Bonfigli starts out strong and the writing is well done. It says "there is little information on his personal life", but I feel it may be possible to find a bit more after looking at a few sources. The article includes what he specialized in and where he went to school which is key. The part I'd want to add to his personal life is who his parents were and where they worked. The information on the pieces of art during his life all are carefully written and well organized. I continued to look at the resources and most of them seem scholarly and up to date. The only one that caught my eye was one by "the guardian", but when I read through the article it had many sources and clearly explained their point. Considering it is classified as an S class I am surprised with how much knowledge is packed into it. The author explains each piece with details on what condition it is in, where it is, and who the artist was influenced by for each piece.