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Bio

About me

Hello. I'm a college student attending EVCC. Some hobbies of mine would be hiking, cars, reading, painting, drawing, walks with my dogs.  I have two dogs, their names are Nismo and Unna. Nismo is a German Shepperd, Husky mix, Unna is a Pitbull. In my free time, my significant other and I like to set up little doggie dates and pick a park and enjoy our time together. A couple of hikes I've been able to do are Banca Lake, Lake 22, and Pilchuck. Washington is such a beautiful state to live in.

Nismo is Nissan Motorsports known for high-performance cars.

My Wikipedia interests

Ill be using Wikipedia for school purposes. Covering subjects and for class projects.

Article evaluation

I am interested in racing games Forza being one of them. I’ve recently started playing this game. Driving a 2013 Subaru BRZ as my car of choice.  I visited the Forza Horizon 5 article on Wikipedia and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: citations, information being left out, the game being under-represented.

Citations

When reading the article I didn't seem to have enough citations. I happen to notice that the page was mentioning citations were placed but couldn't seem to find them until I got to the reference section. When clicking on these citations they weren't informative to the information being told about the game. I noticed that when citing the release date they had gotten the wrong release date and the citation mentioned another date. Citations represent more than one fact but only one fact is being stated. Some of the citations were not accurate based on the game itself.

Information

The stricture of the article gave me a visional look of not being well put together or a last-minute thing. This article was not divided where it’s readable to understand all the differences of topics everything is placed in one section. So many facts were left out from this article from how many cars are in the game. To how many induvial ways to earn points, money and how to get Forza cars. How you can do unique races even making your own race map. How to customize your character or custom your car and the kind of engines you can use.

Completeness

When reading this article it was overall under-represented, starting with pixel improvement. Forza made his game one of the most realistic racing games. From environmental setting to how your car would be affected in different weather conations. They failed to mention how Forza made their best to make this game’s map bigger and more fun to explore when driving with friends. Also failed to motion that this game has different setting with a wide range of cars all meant for different satiations from street racing to off rodeoing. Making this a very unique game.

Conclusion

Overall the article needs more work, starting with having having clear faction on the citations that are traced to more accurate facts. Adding more information based on the game and the background of it will be divided within itself. Overall presenting the game in a more meticulous way.