User:Heathadr/Anchialine pool/Vmoreno11 Peer Review

Peer review

Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects:

Lead

Guiding questions:

Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Content

Guiding questions:

Is the content added relevant to the topic?
Is the content added up-to-date?
Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:

Is the content added neutral?
Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
Does the content accurately reflect what the cited sources say? (You'll need to refer to the sources to check this.)
Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
Are the sources current?
Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
Are there better sources available, such as peer-reviewed articles in place of news coverage or random websites? (You may need to do some digging to answer this.)
Check a few links. Do they work?

Organization

Guiding questions:

Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Images and Media

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
Are images well-captioned?
Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only

If the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
What are the strengths of the content added?
How can the content added be improved?

Examples of good feedback

A good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.

Peer review of "Homemaking"
Peer review of this article about a famous painting

Additional Resources

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General info

Whose work are you reviewing?

Heathadr and Meagan.OSU

Link to draft you're reviewing
Talk:Anchialine pool
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Anchialine pool

Evaluate the drafted changes

(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I do not see any new updates to this page, but I think it is a great candidate for expansion through this course. There is already a small section on the ecology of anchialine pools, that I think can be further expanded with scholarly references on the microbes that live here and the chemical, thermal, and redox conditions they must adapt to in order to survive in this environment.

I can also see potential for sub-sections on the geologic formation of anchialine pools, the timescale over which they develop, and even cultural significance to indigenous communities that live near them or travelers that visit them, (as is the case for cenotes).

I look forward to seeing the final page edits! Vmoreno11 (talk) 16:55, 31 October 2022 (UTC)

After revisiting this page, I have a few extra comments for review.

First off, I think this is a great topic! Doing a quick comparison between the current live Wikipedia page and the edits that y'all have made so far shows that you have added a lot of great material so far.

I really like the extensive info on the geologic settings of these phenomena; my suggestion might be to reframe the section heading to "Geologic Formation" or something along those lines, only because the three subsections all seem to be related to the geologic processes that lead to the formation of them.

I also think y'all have done an incredible job with the ecology section - it's super extensive! It does feel a bit dense for a Wikipedia page, so maybe splitting things a bit more into sub-sections might be useful for readers who might be skimming and looking for more specific information (think of the way you use Wikipedia ... might just be me but I often use it as a tool to extract specific information about a major topic and then go to the references from there).

Overall I think this is great progress on the page! Of course, there are some areas where the references need to be formatted so they are superscripts and accessible by link, but that should be a pretty quick fix. Vmoreno11 (talk) 07:57, 17 November 2022 (UTC)