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Tutorial 8:

Bad article:

Bad Article: Operation Shady RAT

Improvements:

- no subheadings or other sections

- few citations/ references

- not an appropriate length for an article

- no images or media files

- no infoboxes

- very short lead/summary

Good Features:

- proper grammar and punctuation

- has link to other relevant pages (i.e. See Also)

- has a clear title

- unbiased

- reliable sources

Wikiproject: Computing

according to the computing Wikiproject page, the article falls under the lowest class quality (stub-class) which means a very basic description of the topic where any editing and additional information added would be useful to the article. Furthermore, on the talk page a user is quoted as saying "This article was a redirect to McAfee, which makes no sense at least currently as the McAfee article has no information on Operation Shady RAT", hence further classifying it as a poor article.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/FC_Barcelona

Good features:

—well organized with timeframe;

—many photos and illustrations are included to provide a better understanding to readers;

—different stages were divided by different coaches as a significant era time point;

—honors and records were provided as a statistical prospective for readers;

—players and staff are introduced to give a better picture for the formation of the club.

The article is good by integrating different parts logically and systematically. On the right side of the page it shows the seal of the club and more information about the stadium. The first major part of the article introduces the history of the club with major events or progress. The history part was divided by different coaches as different stages to provide readers better overview and understanding about its progress and achievement.

Tutorial 6:

*Author background

Be reliable because museum is dedicated to his life. Hence, the information is accurate.

*Where source published

Internet.

*Information

The site does not have any external references or facts and it is relying on its own authority as the Bradman Museum rather than some facts or publications. Therefore, it is not independently verifiable. However, information on the website is consistent with other sources.

*Context-Age of sources relative to topic.

It was published on 1st Sep. 2007. And Don Bradman’s last game was in 1948, however, as its a biography. The time period is irrelevant.

*Intend of information, targeted audience

Intend of information is to inform us of his early life and career with no particular targeted audiences.

*Does the source omit important details and overrepresent others?

Rather than focusing broadly on his early life (family, education, etc.). It looks into his early cricket training.

*Is the information fact or opinion?

The information is fact rather than opinion.

Tutorial 5: Activity 1

In year 1886 in China, Empress Dowager Cixi was with co-regency with Empress Dowager Ci'an. Empress Dowager Cixi

When China was in year of 1886, the Emperor Guangxu was on his regin.

Tutorial 4: Activity 1 Characteristics of a Featured Article (FIFA World Cup)

- The titles in the article describe the information they are presenting well, with Capitalisation of the first letter, no punctuation at the end, no starts with A, An or The

- Large number of citations, meaning a variety of sources that are input into the article to make sure the best information is being presented

- Time and dates are well presented with each piece of information being supported by an appropriate and correct date

- All quotes in the article are immediately and correctly cited

- Sufficient media files (mainly Images) that are appropriately implemented such that they correspond to the adjacent information

- It writes out both the full name and the abbreviation at first occurence. This is the correct Abbreviation technique pertaining to a Featured article

Tutorial 3: Activity 2 and Activity 4

Activity 2: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yudhvir_Malik ^{[expand acronym]} For IAS ^{[further explanation needed]} For Haryana More information about IAS and Haryana should be added to clarify some details about them. I found a detailed Wikipedia Page could be linked to the page for IAS and Haryana :[[1]] [[2]]

Talk:Yudhvir Malik#Citations Need

Activity 4: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mark_Bosco

The tags for words literary tradition, aesthetics, art, and the religious imagination will be unnecessary and kind of redundancy because these are simply broad words. So I removed the external link and make them without being capitalized.

Tutorial 2: Schenley park was created in 1889 with the generous donation made by Mary Schenley. The park mainly comprise with sports filed, trails, woods and a lot of attractions. Most students and faculties from the University of Pittsburgh, Carnegie Mellon University and local residents visit Schenley park with high frequencies. Also, the park usually hosts major annual events such as Vintage Grand Prix and the Pittsburgh Race for the Cure. Visitors have free access to all facilities within the park, including track and filed court, tennis court and some training equipment. There is a golf practice field which charges a nominal fee for the public admission and some college level golf courses are provided in this field.