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Two Articles that Need Improvement with Bullet-point Explanations
edit- Gym
- Some of the info sounds unreliable and/or irrelevant
- Article doesn't "flow" well
Juice
- Could have more relevant information
Five Articles I'd Like to Work on In Order of Preference
- Music genre
- Record label
- Album
- Single (music)
- Record producer