Article Evaluation
editThe article of KJ Apa is found to be very visited, however, since he is just a starting artist there isn't much to be found. I found it to be very short. As I began my research I ended up finding out that the last editor interested Apa's wrong birthday, in which case I changed it. Overall I added more information about his journey and what he did to get there. Information about his family and the college he attended. The article seems to be very precise just very short. The easiest part to edit was the Box Office section where his parents name was not displayed and it had the wrong date of birth.
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edit- ^ “Introducing KJ Apa • Your first source for all things KJ Apa.” Introducing KJ Apa Your first source for all things KJ Apa, kj-apa.com/. Accessed 5 Sept. 2017.
Here is my signature: JulitzaLopez (talk) 02:00, 5 September 2017
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