Kimkjun

This is the page of a college student in a class taught by Stevenarntson. Please contact Steven at his talk page if you have any questions.

Bio

About me

I am Kyeongjun Kim and student in Everett community college. I was born in 2000 and I am Korean. I am currently living in South Korea. My favorite sport is Judo. Because It can relieve stress and I can keep myself from someone when I learn Judo.

My Wikipedia activities

I study Wikipedia in my class that is English 101 from Steven, and I want to know about that is for known future technology in Wikipedia. Because I have been interested in space and airplane. That is why I made a choice aviation maintenance technology for my major.

Article evaluation

I've been interested in Judo for a few 5years. It means I've been taught Judo for 5years. So I decided to look up my favorite judo player's page. The player's name is Min ho Choi. After I entered his article, I realized that his Wikipedia article was too poor. What is worth mentioning about the three aspects is the lack of information, citation, and Structure. This is a lack of a link to Wikipedia's article page.

Lack of information

There is a lack of information about his primary skill in the matches and how one is getting along. Even a character article found no educational background, height, weight, and any of his characteristics. I believe this page has insufficient information because I looked up other characters' articles on Wikipedia, and I could find even a little bit of their knowledge.

Citation

There are many citations on the page, but these citations are not essential to explain him. I wish there were a more critical quote. For example, I want to there were citations using articles from more reliable sources.

Structure

I know another famous Japanese judo player, Toshihiko Koga, Wikipedia article, has more information to know him and quotes from reliable sources, making it easy to see and good Structure. For example, which he lost and won a match with. This article looks easy and straightforward to make.

Summary

Overall, I can tell you that this page lacks a lot. The amount of information provided is small, and there are not even photos showing him. I believe it would be nicer if people interested in Judo, other than me, or people who know information about it, edited this article.